Introduction: This poem is written on May 15, 2014. I write this poem because we learn how to write metaphor poem in the class.
Conclusion: The hardest part of this poem is I need to find something that share same characteristic of my father. I did well on finding these things. However, I need to improve on making this poem more detailed and describe what is the similarity of my father and these things. I learn how to write metaphor poem after writing this poem.
Metaphor Poem
My father
My father is a gardener,
Working under the sun,
Take care of the plant without rest,
His sweat helps me to grow more luxuriant like plants.
My father is a pole used in pole vault,
Without it,
The athlete can never reach the highest point,
His encourage helps me achieve my future.
My father is a pen,
Students need it every day.
They use it to write down every letter and learn lots of knowledge,